Tuesday, September 27, 2005

Sarah's Paragraph

"Oh please Ffion," said Anewen.

"What?" said Ffion. "Like you’ve never thought of him that way."

"Ffion, please, the important thing is winning the competition right now and I do need to speak with him for a moment now that he’s obviously seen me".

"Oh right, you need to speak with him," Ffion raised her eyebrows in suspicion. "Yeah, I’ll see you later."

"‘Bye," said Anwen. She really wasn’t sure what she thought about being partnered with Trince ever since they were flinglings they had been academic rivals although they never hated each other. Trince was also kind, unlike the other military links.

"I should be grateful I was chosen at all," she thought to herself. She didn’t mind Trince but she wasn’t sure she could ever feel love towards him, if they were to win and be married as binders. Anwen shook herself, acting out of duty, she decided to talk to Trince.

" Hello Anwen,"said Trince in his stiff military form, "I’m looking forward to compete with a companion as capable as you are."

"Uhhh, thank you," said Anwen, not quite sure if he was trying to compliment her.

Trince nodded, "I hope you are feeling well, we both need to be at the top of our game if we are going to win."

"I’m feeling fine."

"Good, I’d like to go over some tactics with you just to make sure were on the same page."

"And I you," said Anwen.

"Huh?" said Trince in a confused voice.

"I too have plans that could help us win," said Anwen.

"Oh, well, I didn’t expect, I mean," Trince spluttered but quickly regained his composure and cleared his throat. "Well, we need to collaborate I’m sure well make a good team."

"I suppose we will," said Anwen suppressing a smile.

"I was hoping to meet you at the training grounds tomorrow, shortly after dawn," said Trince rather pleased at her agreement.

"I’ll be there," said Anwen.

"Well farewell ‘till then," Trince saluted smartly and did an about face.

"Till then," Anwen smiled as she walked to the home she shared with Ffion’s family. Everything she had worked for since she was a flingling was finally happening.

9 comments:

Captain Whitney said...

I really liked this one- it just didn't put enough into the story- from this we didn't find anything out about the charicters or anything- so it's good, but not wonderful.

Captain Whitney said...

You tell ME to hurry up- you haven't BLOGED in AGES!!

Ginny-Gin-Gin said...

I would make a post except my computer is being weird and won't let me post and I'm too scared to try and fix it! (My grandpa would KILL me if something changed on the computer, he HATES it when anybody messes around with the computer.) So, a short up-date, I've been sick for the last two weeks but I'm finally better! (Whopee!) More later (I've got to go!)

Captain Whitney said...

I understand- but hurry! I'm dying waiting for you peoples, now I know how you felt!
Sorry uv been sick but I'm glad ur better!

Captain Whitney said...

Just some doofus like the others I'm sure.

Captain Whitney said...

Okay, now that I know it won here's my idea on it:
I rather liked it but I don't think it showed what's his name in a good way. It made him seem like anti-girls. Like one of those guys who thinks girls can't think for themselves. I also thought it didn't give you much information.

Ginny-Gin-Gin said...

Yeah, I agree with you COMPLETELY! It doesn't really add anything, just make it so there's more time for akward converstation.

Captain Whitney said...

Yeah- it's just like there's no point in having this part of the story at all...

Captain Whitney said...

Have you ever noticed that I use ... more than almost any other punctuation?