Trince came over and Anwen said, "Hello."
Trince wept.
Anwen said, "Why are you weeping?"
Trince said, "I am in love with Narzelda and now she’s my rival."
Anwen said, "I am sorry. I hope you will learn to love me too."
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Um- I don't know what to say on this one. I'm keeping silent.
Kendle made it that way on purpose, she doesn't like to do the writing, but she loves giving ideas. Infact, she's an awsome idea person. She did this paragraph hoping that Brianne and Sarah would realize that she dosn't want to write, she wants to give ideas but they still don't get it.
I understand that- I think.
Ideas are helpful- I have a friend who loves to give ideas but she won't write anythign (or do much else for that matter). But she came up with all of our Brilliant stuff.
I guess some people are just better then that- for me it's hard to get ORRIGANAL ideas.
Actually I really liked the ideas this chapter portraid (though I think if you keep them you should put them in a differant way- no offense ment to Kendle). I thought it was interesting that Trince was in love with What's-her-face, though I like it better in UR's when he thinks What's-her-face is evil.
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